Hello,
What you are asking for is called developmental editing, and I'd be happy to help you. My services include carefully reading your novel and giving you comments on the plot(s), pacing, characterizations, descriptive writing, what should be added/omitted, what needs work and offering suggestions for improving your novel. What genre are you writing in? Can you describe your ideal reader? Would you like to receive my comments in a written document or in a phone call?
Let me introduce myself. My name is Julie Webb, and I’m a professional editor and proofreader with 36 years of experience, which includes working on a wide range of fiction and nonfiction books, research articles, and manuals. My Bachelor's degree is in English. I use Microsoft Word with the Track Changes feature turned on or Google Docs.
My work earns excellent ratings with an average a 4.9 out of 5 rating from my 211 clients, as shown at https://www.freelancer.com/u/jw010699.html. My clients' comments include, "Julie was a pleasure to work with. She gave great feedback and I would recommend her as an editor to anyone who is writing a book," "This is the second time I have worked with Julie and I highly recommend her to anyone who is in need of a freelance editor," and "Julie, as always thank you a lot for your attentive editing!”
i really enjoy working with authors, and hope to hear from you soon.
Best regards,
Julie Webb