Rewrite [login to view URL] Product Description A+ page (English Native Speakers Only Please)

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***OPEN TO ENGLISH NATIVE SPEAKERS ONLY PLEASE***

Ideally you will be American, have lived in the US or deal a lot with Americans- this text is only targeted to the US market band you need to understand our customer mentally well as this is aimed for Amazon.com. THANK YOU

NB we are a small California based company- but this you will see it the attachment :-)

Hi all,

We need this as fast as possible (of course!)

you will find attached 2 versions of same text

• One to read the original text first

• Second version with comments

This is a product description for our Amazon page. We are part of the [login to view URL] Exclusives programs (product selected by Amazon for being innovative and sold only on Amazon). This gives us access to a more detailed product page, called A+ page. We are not very happy with what we have so far.

We use plants. This is a food product, we need to follow the FDA regulation and cannot use words like ‘healthy’ as it could be seen as a false claim. It is very important that we do not claim anything but at the same time give the message across.

We are all about transparency. Our product is unique and as you can see with the reviews it really gives energy [login to view URL]

Unfortunately we cannot mention reviews in the product description! Also as we work with plants there is still the odd exception that it does not work so we need to ‘cover ourselves and set expectations to avoid disappointment’. We really care about our customers and this should show in the writing.

The goal: improve/revamp/add/totally change the text (whatever you think will work best) to appeal to customers and increase our conversion rate, highlight our uniqueness and healthy characteristics and set expectations at the same time.

There are 2 parts in the text: product info and company info.

Product info: most of it is ok, we probably can add something to make it appealing. We have 2 flavors, we ran out of the first one ‘dark chocolate & coconut”. The second one, French Roast, is less successful. However people who try it like it. We want to add something about this flavor to make it more appealing to consumers

Company info: The exclusive program is about small companies and people like to read about the background. What we have now is not good and this is the part we absolutely want to improve. It needs to focus more on the company than on the founder/ or it can be twisted differently.

Please ask anything…what you change should not change the overall meaning

Our website for extra info: [login to view URL]

Here is an example of another product A+ Product Description page so you see the overall layout [login to view URL]

If you do a great job with this we may also ask for our website content to be revamped!

We are still working on the images otherwise they would have all been included: missing top banner and 3 images at the bottom (they could help for the text but we are still on it)

Thank you for reading .

I gave as many detail as possible, please check it before applying and wasting your time and mine ;-) Thank you.

Valerie ***************************************************************************

Original text : 620 words,3671 characters with spaces / Can be reduced /no upper limit – however too much is too much right? ***************************************************************************

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