After Effects video creation - how talented are you?

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  oto17

  • 7 años atrás

  so why the audience is more than 25 years old, I decided to have a much texts and less animation. I worked in this days on other project: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aWpLVp-zkgI and I do not had enough time , so if there will be another works I can animate is with high level motion graphics , if you select me as winner please check link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lEgWNwGKkGo

  • 7 años atrás
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     Organizador del concurso

     • 7 años atrás

     Great work, still reviewing the others

     • 7 años atrás
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  oto17

  • 7 años atrás

  okay I draw man character younger and also there is new character girl. I tried to look like to australian woman. and changed last part of video... please check link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_6ETzOJ5Ppk&feature=youtu.be

  • 7 años atrás
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     Organizador del concurso

     • 7 años atrás

     There are some changes made for the better and some not so. Firstly, the male character is excellent and to date, the most perfect representation of a male for the security industry..... Again your text selection is brilliant. The female character is close enough in my humble opinion and it works. Now after reviewing other entries, I've realised your entry has too many words and these need to be broken down and said with imagery and some text..... for example: instead of writing the whole phrase "the quick brown fox jumps over the lazy dog"..... you could show a brown fox jumping over a lazy looking dog and completely avoid text..... so your elements definitely need to address that element. The end is off message, in that your background is black. Don't get me wrong, black can work, but I believe a lighter background is better, as you have chosen

     • 7 años atrás
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     Organizador del concurso

     • 7 años atrás

     So I would continue with a white background at the end, and remove the colour in the hashtag..... In summary, I'm not sure if the other entries are all sealed, but I would have a look, it might provide some greater insight.

     • 7 años atrás
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  oto17

  • 7 años atrás

  okay sir i will updete soon

  • 7 años atrás
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  oto17

  • 7 años atrás

  hello, please check my update and give some feedback, thank you... https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XzRV0gB0Vg8&feature=youtu.be

  • 7 años atrás
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     Organizador del concurso

     • 7 años atrás

     Excellent work....... what I like and it is a clear winning element, is your text selection, I very much like it. The audio is near on perfect, very similar to the audio I have been thinking already, in fact I think I have even had that as a 2nd choice. Your character change is amazing for the older guy, maybe we could go something slightly younger, but a great character none the less. I would have a look at Australian Aboriginal professional women, to gauge a better understanding of their features. Outside the change to the female just mentioned, I would look at doubling your video length with a greater range of skills. If have of had a longer video with a greater set of skills demonstrated, your video would be in the lead right now.... it's pretty close to be honest.....

     • 7 años atrás
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     Organizador del concurso

     • 7 años atrás

     To clarify on the Australian indigenous woman, I would Google search for imagery of what they look like and try to replicate that......

     • 7 años atrás
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  Organizador del concurso

  • 7 años atrás

  I have viewed your work already, some great logo introductions and animation projects there...... It's why I would encourage you to fine tune your original entry...... I like your style

  • 7 años atrás
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     oto17

     • 7 años atrás

     thank you, i am working

     • 7 años atrás
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  • 7 años atrás

  Also, the contest has been corrected to end in 2 days + time, so you have some time to provide an improvement...... I would suggest extending your delivery to 30 seconds with some audio... happy with it having copyright voice overs...... I'm just chasing in this contest to see how people can time transitions to music/audio timing.... that's important to me

  • 7 años atrás
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     oto17

     • 7 años atrás

     okay dear,also you can see my works in links , thank you!

     • 7 años atrás
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  Organizador del concurso

  • 7 años atrás

  The female does look a little American...... a bit like a good housewife, she needs to look a bit more corporate, so does the male... in fact the female could have darker skin colour, the male can look older, i.e.: over 50

  • 7 años atrás
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  Organizador del concurso

  • 7 años atrás

  Transition is great ...... I accidentally hit enter and the rest of my comments weren't not sent... ;-)
  In fact transition is very good. The characters are good, but they would be better in uniforms.... the male needs to loose the "moustache" a beard or clean shaven will work.... clean short hair cut is better than longer hair...... the women also needs to be in a uniform..... when it comes to uniforms, think police uniform, but without all the badges of a police uniform.

  • 7 años atrás
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     oto17

     • 7 años atrás

     okay sir

     • 7 años atrás
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  oto17

  • 7 años atrás

  you don't like last transition?

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  oto17

  • 7 años atrás

  okay :)

  • 7 años atrás
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  Organizador del concurso

  • 7 años atrás

  OK, some feedback for you..... firstly, really good start, the best so far. I like your good use of the colour theming and the animation of text...... Like another, I wouldn't use the pie graph as it isn't suitable for presenting how big something is... this is $6,200,000,000 Billion Australian dollars per year.... that's a lot of money..... so you will need to display this amount that it gives people the impression that the industry is very big..... Hot tip, have a look at other industries in Australia, (Australian government websites have the data and it's easy to find) and maybe compare it to other industries.. though use other industries that are smaller in value, not greater.

  • 7 años atrás
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     oto17

     • 7 años atrás

     okay please wait, thank you for feedback

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  Organizador del concurso

  • 7 años atrás

  Also, if you have questions, please ask them via your entry...... multiple general posts make it hard for others to keep up with updates ;-)

  • 7 años atrás

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