Need help: writing a 5 pages photography book Chapter

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  sharifbge42

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  Please check my update entry #60

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  wedy1587

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  please check #53

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  monironepointac4

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  please check #54

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  arjunvs0369

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  SIR PLEASE DO HAVE A LOOK AT #52 BEFORE FINALIZING THE PRIZE WINNER

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  Organizador del concurso

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  #43 not what I asked for

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     MuhammadSheri

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     Can you please tell me how?

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     MuhammadSheri

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     You've gave 4 stars to copy pasters and not to the genuine writers

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  Organizador del concurso

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  #49 very wordy and hard to read

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  Organizador del concurso

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  #47 Not what I asked for

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  Organizador del concurso

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  #45 not what I asked for

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  udemepaul

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  I am making a new submission soon

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  Organizador del concurso

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  #40 terrible writing

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  Organizador del concurso

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  #44 Not what I asked for

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  Faithzeal

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  Sir, you may want to check some of these entries for plagiarism as this can get you in trouble if published. I can see word for word copy and paste in most entries. From A to Z. Not one single change, not one. If you want I can send you links to the web pages they were copied from. (I hope they dont withdraw before then) It's not a fair play when some people just stroll to the internet to copy and paste, then qualify while those who painstakingly research are disqualified. But if this is what you want who I am to point it out.

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     Organizador del concurso

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     I understand... This is a concern for me... As I am looking original writing... you are not the first person to point this out...

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  Faithzeal

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  Here's entry #19 who smart enough to probably add his first paragraph. The rest were copied word for word from this link: https://photographylife.com/understanding-focus-in-photography#

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     Organizador del concurso

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     That's sad cause I liked his first paragraphs more... They were short and straight to the point... Was actually gonna ask me to edit the complicated parts...

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  Faithzeal

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  And some others too...it's no use pointing them out. Sorry guys. Someone copied my entry WORD FOR WORD sometime ago and I know how it felt. Guess the rush and limited time is the reason they copy.

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  MuhammadSheri

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  Hey there, I've updated my entry as per your instructions, its #43 now. Added diagrams and simple explanations for beginners , covered all the points in exact 5 pages.
  
  Designs are already sent, so please let me know if you need any further changes.

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  wedy1587

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  SIR CHECK #40

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  Organizador del concurso

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  #28 nice design... content not to the point, too fluffy... could be improved...

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     Organizador del concurso

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     Your content is very wordy... I want it to be straight to the point... no fluffs... You should be able to cover everything I requested in 5 pages including images... This is a photography book... by the end of the chapter, I want the reader to: know where to focus, how to find and choose focus, and how to use focus creatively... Anything additional content is waste

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     Mohaimin2461

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     Your suggestions are noted. Thank you for your feedback. I will come up with a more compact and efficient content.

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  Organizador del concurso

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  #37 content could be improved and made to the point... The flow is terrible...

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     Organizador del concurso

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     Typos and used big words...

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     Organizador del concurso

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     I want a 10 year old to be able to read this book and take great photos

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  MuhammadSheri

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  I just woke up and noticed that you've updated the contest and mentioned that we need to add Diagrams as well. So, here is #34 updated entry, explained with diagrams.
  
  Rest, I've sent you designs in INBOX as well. If you select me, I can do further updates with the content and can provide more designs as well for free. Please check and give me detailed feedback.
  
  Thank You!

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     Organizador del concurso

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     Just create content that is on point and stick to the requirements

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  Organizador del concurso

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  #30 #31 #32 #33 #34 long winded... over page limit... tiring to read

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     MuhammadSheri

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     Okay, Thanks for the feedback. I'll remove the detailed explanations and will keep it simple understandable with diagrams only.

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     MuhammadSheri

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     It exceed to 10 pages because I wanted the beginner to understand the topics properly in detail.

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  Organizador del concurso

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  #38 hard to read

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  Organizador del concurso

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  #39 boring to look at

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  Organizador del concurso

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  #29 terrible writing

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  Faithzeal

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  Will submit mine very soon.

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  Organizador del concurso

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  #27 nice design no content

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  Organizador del concurso

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  #26 not very easy to understand

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  Organizador del concurso

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  #24 #25 content not showing

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     Organizador del concurso

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     content Not easy to read... to complicated... big terminology etc.

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  emilcp

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  I've submitted an entry on a full chapter, as requested in the project description. However, I have only provided content as the prize may be insufficient to cover both content writing and layout design services. If there is an increase in the prize pool, then I may provide a full layout as well. #increaseprize

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     Organizador del concurso

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     contest has been updated just focus on content writing for now...

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  Organizador del concurso

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  I have updated the contest... Do not worry too much about the design now... Just focus on content writing... making it easy to understand

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  Organizador del concurso

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  #10 beautiful... but no diagrams... missing key content... Doesn't show to what is ISO, or any of the Complicated terms... Visually pleasing to look...

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     amscastaneda

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     Hello thank you so much! Your comments are noted. I will work on it. Just to clarify, is the book an introduction to photography over all? So I know if I'll dedicate a page to explaining the terms and basics in photography?

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     Organizador del concurso

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     Yes... I want you to make every single page supper easy to understand... with diagrams and stay on topic... use examples... and use basic language

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  Organizador del concurso

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  #19 lovely content... some content missing, design could be improved a little

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     Organizador del concurso

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     I like how simple it is to understand...

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     Organizador del concurso

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     I like your writing style... it is simple, to the point and easy to understand... I don't like the background though

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  Organizador del concurso

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  #18 too much words no diagrams

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  Organizador del concurso

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  #20 no visual examples... not diagrams

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